Mirakee
The Moment
How could I delineate that moment in just word
The moment our passion shared without fear
That moment, where no one around us to hear
When, No hurdles between our hearts to retard
The moment, sound of silence get defeated
Infront of our thundering heart beats
The moment, exploading divine heavens treats
Between our lips get starting to debated
The moment, our emotions wins over the verses
The very moment, Which my heart want to conceal
Inside Forever keep it alive within me to feel
The moment, unspoken our feeling get endorse
How could I delineate the moment in word
When, No hurdles between our hearts to retard
©sharmilajuliet
#Conceal
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sharmilajuliet
13w
Read MoreThe Moment
How could I delineate that moment in just word
The moment our passion shared without fear
That moment, where no one around us to hear
When, No hurdles between our hearts to retard
The moment, sound of silence get defeated
Infront of our thundering heart beats
The moment, exploading divine heavens treats Between our lips get starting to debated
The moment, our emotions wins over the verses
The very moment, Which my heart want to conceal
Inside Forever keep it alive within me to feel
The moment, unspoken our feeling get endorse
How could I delineate the moment in word
When, No hurdles between our hearts to retard
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Poem Format : Swannet
Rules: This form whilst not the creation of the Canadian poet, Gloria Carpenter, it became her trademark, being used in conjunction with her elemental and avian photo studies in British Columbia.
It is a straight forward form comprising of 3 Envelope Stanzas or Italian Quatrains and a couplet referenced back to the first and last line of the first stanza.
The rhyme scheme is .A1. b. b. A2... c. d. d. c... e. f. f. e... A1. A2.
The meter is not specified but is usualy tetrameter (Envelope) or pentameter (Italan).
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25th November 2019
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hharshitha
21w
Read More|| THE WRITER'S TALE ||
Remember this tale i tell you
When a writer is brutally in love with you,
They're gonna pen down to every last
memory y'all had on a simple white paper,
Right from the first clash to the last goodbye
you'll never fade away in their poetry,
Describing the timeless beauty of nature that
took time to embrace you with love,
To the times that broke them apart to concealed their bittersweet emotions,
Penning down their feelings cause maybe this way you'll stay here in their words forever & ever,
For the rest of their lives even if you would disappear into thin air someday,
Darling they're gonna love you for a thousand years and maybe a thousand more!
©hharshitha
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PLEASE READ THE CAPTION ♡"The Writer's Tale"
Describing the timeless beauty of nature
that took time to embrace you with love,
To the times that broke them apart to concealed their bittersweet emotions.
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the_starry_mind
23w
Read MoreEven the most anonymous of actions in life has a reason for their existence. What we so often call 'anonymous' is here in our life for a reason. Just remember, that there is a difference between listening to heart and merely its beating. It's just that there are some things that neither the laws of physics can justify, nor the synthetic formulae of maths calculate. But the heart befriends the omens. If comprehends the wave less voices that the ears can't catch. Oh, but how can one admire the dazzle with shut eyes and feel the whispers of love in the pandemonium we so blindly endear? Our every enemy, every downfall, the most broken of wails, the most frosty of hails, they speak the ultimate language of the soul of the world, the only medium of our dreams to beckon to us. It is in the warmness of our leaked emotions and in the coldness of the fall, where the message lies, for the most bewitching of magic hides in the ordinary. The wind kisses our cheeks every time we step ahead to tell us that to feel the zestful breeze of life, you need to sprint fast enough. And that too, is just a tiny fragment of the magic that the wind conceals. But something as arcane as magic cannot be seen by all because today, most of us are blind, for it is a sight without a vision that truly defines the deprivation of one's senses. It is but a vision that can see beyond the eyes, the miracle that awaits us to make every cell of our body aquiver with colours and life.
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This was my first time writing off of my style. Thank you so much for reading! ��
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Heal Yourself,
Feel Yourself,
Deal Yourself,
But don't Conceal Yourself.
©vroshan_21 -
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37w
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what she felt
she concealed that
to moored herself
to avert her affinity
she kept silent!
©aynam_ -
All possession on your hand
Besides the mirrors where you lie moribund
All tales that you encompassed
The tides that you navigated
Her face behind the sunset
The hands that taught you to tread
Endless pavements that you divulged
What does it seem
A soothing harbour ?
Or a seemingly sisyphean wandering.
Did that count that you pondered on ?
Was it worth to let go things ?
To conceal love
To regress smiles
To see her the last time. -
ray_madhusmita
44w
Tongued eye(କଥାକୁହା ଆଖି)
Thousand times you have concealed
the core-words to speak
Oh! no...the benign eyes failed to catch
the proficient trick
Love finds the straight simple way to stream
You wont be able to hide the blissful
gleam
Translation:-
ହ୍ରୁଦୟର କଥା ଶତଶତ ବାର ଲୁଚ଼ାଇଛି ସିନା ଶବ୍ଦ
ହାୟ!ଏ କୋମଳ ନିରିହ ଆଖି ଯେ ବଖାଣିଲା ତା'ର ଭେଦ
ପ୍ରେମ ପାଇଗଲା ସରଳ ରାହା ଟେ ବହିବାକୁ ଧିରେଧିରେ
ଅମ୍ରୁତମୟ ଝଲକ ତାହାର ବଦନୁ ତୁମର ଝରେ
©fancifulmadhusmita -
rachelwritez
46w
We all have flaws
Few conceal them
While others cherish them
©rachelwritez -
I'm at the other side
Where you promised
To let free your veil
Come tonight
Even the sky isn't overcast
Let stars be witness
Let moon be the mirror
Come with the current of tides
With whispering breeze
Come armoured with lanterns
Let the face have no silhouette
Let eyes meet tonight
We can't be any closer
Don't let the fear of cessation
Slow you to the shore
I'm here tonight
Let me move my hands
To count your countless fringes
How they descend on your forehead
Don't let the fear of dawn
Nullify this night
I'm here tonight
©ryan_writes -
hira_sheikh
48w
Don't conceal your weaknesses with the cloak of rudeness for it yields only ephemeral joys and an eternity in desolation.
©hira_sheikh -
Concealing smile
Bigger the curve of the smile ,
Louder the noise of the laughter ,
Higher is the amount of scar
That the person is beautifully concealing ❤
©rachelwritez -
Word of the day 'conceal'
It starts with little fire-kins
Leads to flames of love
Steam of passion
Desire of forever
And when you give all, have nothing to conceal
It rips your heart from the chest
And
You hope to die!
©rash_her -
angels_halo_always_shines
50w
Read More#hope #conceal #empathmind #empath #writersnetwork #depression #mirakeeworld #mirakee #bornthisway #ohiowriter
I don't know how this will be read, but it's something I had to let free.Concealed Weapons
Somedays as I walk by all of the wounded,
I wonder if as I can read them, in an instant,
Can I be read as fast by them?
As we walk by people,
Everyday.
Do they know I can read them?
I came to the conclusion of that question as fast as I had asked it.
Yes indeed they can.
If eye contact is made,
All of our paths,
Our pains turned in to illusions,
And all we have put in our lives that makes us who we are,
All we have endured,
Gone misdirected, on a broken path,
Had gotten lost, begging the Angels to help me to be redirected.
The passersby can indeed read me.
In a flash, in a split second.
All of my life felt through another being.
I mean go figure,
If I can read them,
I too, could be read by many others.
Like myself.
So alone I feel,
No one able to understand me,
When the truth is no one seems to get me.
But the ones that can I can't grasp.
I can feel they are in a close reach.
But
I
............
...............
Just.....
Can't...
Seem...
To....
Find....
My....
Own...
Way....
Through.......
The way out is through....
The way ... out.... is right through.
Right in two...
Finding my way through a life of pure madness...
Depression..
Suicidal thoughts....
Drowning me...
Just to keep me down,
Hoping I can reach my fucking arm through...
To find my own way.
To lead me, as myself.. as I am.
As I have been.
I just hadn't known...
It could possibly have, (life ya know)
Have gone so damn fast.
Not waiting for me.
I had to learn over and over
And over again PATIENCE,
PATIENCE.
PATIENCE.
I know now patience.
From thoughtless actions of my own life's lessons, that we all need to be taught sometimes.
(As long as we are able to accept we are willing to take in, as we need to do so.)
I mean, I am really no one...
But myself.
One's journey,
All through this cruel lifetime.
One lifetime I will NEVER,
EVER begin to forget.
If I try to forget, to block it,
I will always be reminded.
As I look at myself in the mirror,
I can see my reflection clearly,
Scars,
Broken thoughts,
Sickness,
All the beautiful souls we can meet in a lifetime, and more.
We can never forget them.
As I walk through this life,
I can recall knowing their face,
So familiar, I had known them.
I remember.
As I know we will meet again,
In another time.
Another agonizing,
Painful, mind fucking life.
We do it over and over...
And over again.
Each time growing, being molded into who we are.
Not letting one's judgement,
Or perception of who they think we are define us.
Constantly learning,
As we try not to lose the ones we love,
So fast.
As fast as we have in this 1 lifetime.
Knowing what we had done wrong.
Maybe we can by some time..
This time.
Being prepared and all.
Words through our writing can be concealed as weapons.
Never needing a gun in this life.
Nor a knife,
A bat, or any weapons of danger...
We can conceal our words as weapons.
What has one got to lose?
By carrying knowledge from one lifetime,
To another,
Could be rather dangerous.
I suppose through it all we have our words in the end to write,
Hoping to inspire another being.
Never knowing...
Always hoping, that in the end,
One grows stronger.
Going through lifetime to lifetime,
As a life purpose, to change anothers.
To bide time.
We shall see.
As its already begun.
No turning back now.
We are all in sooooo deep.
We can do nothing else.
But to hope.
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udit94
50w
Read More��Concealed Weapon��
I carry with me a concealed weapon.
You should keep that too, I reckon.
Looking at the wrath of this world,
We'll need it as anything can happen.
I have used it many a times.
Against awful sins & unforgivable crimes.
And get myself acquainted with the fact,
Life is not all about chandeliers and wind chimes.
This weapon pierces deep into the heart.
Mastering it is itself an art.
But be careful while using it as,
Its shots never come back once they depart.
About this weapon you might wonder.
Well it's mostly calm and sometimes like raging thunder.
Once you learn how to direct your rage rightly,
It'll hit the bull's eye making no blunder.
It will ask something from you too.
You will be bruised and beaten black and blue.
But don't you give up on yourself,
As the weapon chooses its own master and you're one of those few.
I was the chosen one, I am born anew.
I'm a warrior with my blood having a different hue.
I chose a PEN as my concealed weapon.
For that I'm a writer and I bleed blue.
©udit94
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- fantasy_believer This one is perfect..the way you've penned down is perfectly pure....pen is definitely a concealed weapon
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udit94
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faceless_friend
50w
She, the magic
No matter what she got to talk about but mere listening to her voice does the magic on me and makes my day.
And its fine to have some bad days..
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sanscutie
50w
Tonight I'll water you
My secrets in conceal
Sip out them all
Set my wounds to heal !
©undressed_words -
Mirror
I've never meet you eye to eye,
Yet you give me solace
When the truth is concealed
No one give credence to such tale
Yet here you are
Who know me the best
Staying with me always
And now I know why
©cohen_tree -
juniflrz
50w
Conceal
Deal with the ever changing personalities for they are the defining qualities that conceal a person’s truest emotions.
©juniflrz?
03/09/19 -
The look in her eyes tells everything, however the smile try to conceal it.
©tasneem_alice
