#Untold

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  • lonelywhale 2d

    Dear My Friend : Agust D-2

    Let's be honest here, the song makes you feel sad. Whether it's being sad for a friend you've lost yourself or being sad even for Yoongi. To think that we know people whereas we really don't. Not when Yoongi so beautifully and in such a melancholic way expressed yet another story of his life to us. A story wherein he lost a dear friend of his. Dear My Friend is personally a song I can relate to because I've lost a friend or two in my life, whether it be because I've simply lost contact with them or because they're not here anymore.

    The song starts with a simple line, "Ajekdo Yeojhoni" literally meaning "I still miss you" or "Even so, I still miss you" and then goes on to describe the entire incident which takes us back to Yoongi's ordinary life, one where he wasn't Suga and was Min Yoongi. The song continues telling us how Yoongi had a close friend with whom he had shared his thoughts, his ideas, basically himself over 'soju' or beer and how he had lost him when one day he received a call letting him know that his friend is a prisoner at the Seoul Detention Center with Yoongi visiting him once in a while. The song doesn't tell us in detail what exactly his crime was but I believe Yoongi left that to our imagination. Music is what the listener deciphers it to be anyway.

    Even after being released from jail, Yoongi particularly mentions that his friend 'offered him some' which we can only imagine to be some kind of drug and the moment Yoongi declined, he knew he was never gonna see his friend again, he knew how he had changed and that this wasn't the person he was once soulmates with. Although a rap song, the music has a retro vibe and the rapping is done in a slow way letting the listener understand the words sung, with the chorus beautifully brought to life by Kim Jong Wan of NELL with a really catching hook saying "I hate you but I still miss you dear friend." The mixture of guitar, piano and drums in the background makes it perfect and probably one of the things that made me really fall for the song.

    The entire lyrical content gets deeper and more profound whenever the lyrics speak of how good of a friendship they had, exchanging ideas to change the world, passion in both of them that held the power to turn things upside down and whilst Min Yoongi very much has achieved those dreams in his life, he still aches on the fact that his beloved friend isn't there by his side anymore. The vibe is soft but intense at the same time.

    Speaking of the bridge, it has nothing but just the instrumentals playing. The drums and the guitar providing a feeling of both peace and sadness ( according to me ) and it's when the same chorus is sung again, is when you realize that Yoongi didn't really have anything for us to learn from here. He just wanted us to listen to his story and when he's done, he's done, leaving you wanting more. The lines "Even so, I still miss you" keep repeating and you know that's how the story ends. It doesn't get better, it doesn't get worse, it justs ends and so does the song in a matter of a few minutes. Guess good things really don't last long ;)

    In the Break The Silence Docu Series, on the latest episode, Yoongi speaks about how he is envious of people who get to go out with friends and do ordinary activities such as the movies, dining etc, throwing light on the fact that he doesn't have any personal friends. Maybe this shows how an idol's life really is from the inside while all we see is the sparkly appearance of fame and money. Somewhere along the song, we realize that Min Yoongi sometimes misses Min Yoongi and his old life. The life where he had friends and an ordinary schedule. The life where he hasn't lost his dear friend. The life where he is not Suga for a while, where he's not always in the spotlight. The life which is normal.

    In conclusion, Dear My Friend helps us to get to know our idol better, to learn a little more about his life and how not everything that glitters is gold. Not everything that looks happiness feels like it. The way Yoongi expresses himself through his music really makes you think and realize how much he has gone through. If I had the power, I'd tell Min Yoongi that he's got a friend in us, in ARMY. That he's not alone and that to achieve one's dream, you have to lose some and you have to gain some. Dear My Friend is a deeply personal track and the least I can say is that I'm eternally grateful for Yoongi to be able to share this with us considering how reserved of a person he is. I'm sure it took him lots of courage to present this for the whole world to listen and I'm proud of him for that. Now it's time for you to listen to the song again, what're you waiting for? Let's get going! :)

    Hope you enjoyed this. For those of you who don't know this song or haven't heard of it, I suggest you to really take some time and listen to it ( the full album if you want ) because no one has ever composed and sung songs like BTS. Trust me. ��

    #bts #mirakee #mirakeewriters @mirakeeworld @mirakeewriterwork #agustd #poem #song #music #tune #poet #nature #songreview #bangtansonyeondan #mirakeewrite #write #author #sky #oblivion #poetic #friend #friendship #love #hate #poems #untold #lonely

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    DEAR MY FRIEND

    The entire lyrical content gets deeper and more profound whenever the lyrics speak of how good of a friendship they had, exchanging ideas to change the world, passion in both of them that held the power to turn things upside down and whilst Min Yoongi very much has achieved those dreams in his life, he still aches on the fact that his beloved friend isn't there by his side anymore. The vibe is soft but intense at the same time.The lines "Even so, I still miss you" keep repeating and you know that's how the story ends. It doesn't get better, it doesn't get worse, it justs end and so does the song in a matter of a few minutes. Guess good things really don't last long ;)

    ©lonelywhale

  • kajalkathwal 3d

    पहली नज़र

    ना जाने आज भी उसकी याद मेरे शीनें दफ़न क्यूं हैं
    याद हैं मुझे वो पल् जब मैनें उसे पहली बार देखा था
    और मेरी नज़रें उसपे थम सी गई,
    मानो समय भी मेरे आँचल मे जैसे कहीं रूक सा गया।
    मैं दूर बैठी उसे एक नज़र निहारती रही,
    फिर हवा ने भी शरारत की,
    टेबल पे रखे मेरे पेपर्स को अपने साथ बहा लिया,
    मैं फिर परेशान सी होकर उन्हें जल्दी-जल्दी उठानें लगी
    मुझे परेशान देख उससे भी रहा ना गया
    और वो भी उन्हें मेरे साथ समेटने लगा,
    फिर धीरें से मैनें हल्की आवाज़ मे उसे थैंक्स बोला
    और वो मुझे देखकर मुश्कुराने लगा,
    दूर बैठे हम एक दूसरे को बस देख रहे थे
    के तभी बाहर से किसी ने मेरा नाम पुकारा,
    फिर मैंने उसकी तरफ़ देखा और उठकर चली गई।

    ©kajalkathwal

  • zubaan_e_dil 3d

    मीतू !

    मेरी सबसे अच्छी दोस्त !
    प्यार से मैं उसे मीतू बुलाता हूँ ,
    और वो मुझें कुछ भी बुलाती है ।

    जितनी स्वभाव से शांत है उतनी ही वो नटखट है ,
    कैसे भी सवाल हो मेरे , देती जवाब झटपट है ।
    मेरी बेरुखी को बिन कहें ही समझ जाती है ,
    चुपके से अपनी बातों में , मुझें सबकुछ भुला जाती है ।

    मेरी सबसे अच्छी दोस्त !
    प्यार से मैं उसे मीतू बुलाता हूँ...

    करते नहीं बातें हम कभी तो पूरा पूरा हफ़्ता है ,
    उसके बिना ज़िन्दगी में फ़िर कुछ अधूरा सा लगता है ।
    मिलकर फ़िर हम घण्टों एक साथ बैठा करते है ,
    कॉफ़ी के साथ अपनी बातों को फिऱ हम पूरा करते है ।

    मेरी सबसे अच्छी दोस्त !
    प्यार से मैं उसे मीतू बुलाता हूँ...

    जितनी सुंदर वो सूरत से है ,
    सीरत से भी उतनी ही हूर बला है ।
    कहने को आम बात है मग़र ,
    उसके पास शास्त्रीय नृत्य की अनूठी कला हैं ।

    मेरी सबसे अच्छी दोस्त !
    प्यार से मैं उसे मीतू बुलाता हूँ...

    मेरी हर इक ग़लती पर वो मुझें डाटा करती है ,
    मेरी सारी बातों को ख़ुद से बाँटा करती है ।
    उसकी आम बातें भी मुझपर गहरा असर दिखाती है ,
    पक्की यारी को सुनते ही बस उसकी छवि आती है ।

    हाँ वो मेरी सबसे अच्छी दोस्त है !
    और मैं प्यार से उसे मीतू बुलाता हूँ ।।
    ©zubaan_e_dil

  • __piikkkaaaa__ 2w

    Forever

    You're my favourite one
    Your name is written in the
    Room of my heart

    You're my favourite in this century
    Your picture is hacked in the
    Room of my heart

    ©__piikkkaaaa__

  • __piikkkaaaa__ 2w

    Intimacy

    "Intimacy is not who you let touch you. Intimacy is who you text at 3am about your dreams and fears. Intimacy is giving someone your attention, when ten other people are asking for it. Intimacy is the person always in the back of your mind , no matter how distracted you are."

  • the_scribbler_girl_ 2w

    இறைவா

    உம் பணி சுமைகளை
    குறைத்துக் கொள்ளவே
    விண்ணுலகில் இருந்து இவர்களை
    மண்ணுலகிற்கு அனுப்பினாயே
    இறைவா
    இப் பார் போற்றும் பலரை ஈன்றெடுக்கவே
    கருவறையும் கட்டினாயே
    இறைவா
    அன்பெனும் சொல்லிற்கு
    இவர்களால் வடிவம் வரைந்தாயே
    இறைவா
    ஆதி முதல் அந்தம் வரை
    இவர்கள் மூலம் எங்களுக்கு
    அறிய செய்தாயே
    இறைவா
    உம் சக்தியை இவர்கள் செயல்களால் கற்பித்தாயே
    இறைவா
    தினம் மாறும் இவ்வுலகில் அன்பில் நிலைமாறா நிஜங்கள் இவர்கள் இறைவா
    உம்மைபோல் இவர்களை
    எங்களுக்கு தந்தாயே
    இறைவா
    உன்னை இல்லை என்பவன் கூட நீ படைத்த அன்னையை வணங்குவானே
    தலைவா.
    ©the_scribbler_girl_

  • the_scribbler_girl_ 4w

    சொல்லப்படாத காதல் கதைகளுக்கு நடுவில்
    சொல்லியும் கொல்லப்பட்ட
    காதல் கதைகளே இங்கு
    மிகுதி
    ©the_scribbler_girl_

  • bunny__bhavya 5w

    If I start understanding my feelings...
    I'll make room for depression
    ©bunny__bhavya

  • muzamilamin 5w

    Still Need You

    I need you to hear your angelic voice for tranquility of soul. You are the warmest place turned me into cold, believe me this cold feels a lot better.
    I need to see the storm's ahead in your eyes. The times when I'm hard to understand, cold and thoughtless.
    I need you to listen with me country music, euphonic beats soothing a single soul.

    ©OnlyAngel

  • milishamishra_official 6w

    Good vibes

    Every morning
    Comes with new
    Thought & challenge..
    And every Sunset
    End the all
    Problem & difficulties...
    ©milishamishra_official

  • _goddess_of_words_ 6w

    Loves got a Name

    The shadow unborn
    The laces got turn, instead
    Loves got a name
    To claim a heart , instead..
    Watch me go
    Waving around, instead
    Loves got a name
    To make a wish
    To be honest
    To stay ...
    Instead!
    ©_goddess_of_words_

  • quite_quill 6w

    Untold crush!! have you also goes from that stressful situation in your day to day life where you don't tell your crush about your feelings worry about not losing her/him. Here is something for you.
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    #poem #child #childhood #infant #writer #writeup #quote #baby #time #game #lost #love # nature #rulesoflife #creative #orignal #create #creation #quill #quite #quite_quill #poetry #poet #today #nostalgia #thoughts #like #crush #lover #untold

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    Untold Crush

    When I first met her,
    I felt something unfamiliar,
    eagerness somehow arouse in me,
    for having a chit chat with her.
    Sometimes my heart goes on holds,
    due to my feeling of losing her on,
    thinking of having one step more,
    so puts her under that smoke.
    Now when I see her with some other,
    thought both as a rascal couple,
    my thought flew and threw on all,
    enlight how wrong I was,
    put her beneath that fucking smoke.
    ©quite_quill

  • the_alchemiist 7w

    I want to tell you how I feel about you,
    But I'm afraid to,
    For you might not feel the same way.
    I want to tell you, I want to be more than friends,
    But I'm afraid to,
    For you might walk out of my life forever...!!

    ~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~
    I understand this world more, then you may know,
    I could believe in fate and put up a fight,
    BUT YOU AND I ARE NOT WRITTEN.
    Although there is a truth I'd like to write.
    Because
    I don't know how to explain without writing,
    So, Here I'm with all my words and rhyming.
    ***********
    I Love You is just three little words,
    I can't even describe the meaning they hold.
    You've opened my eyes, and showed me a life.
    Even though I'm young, I started questioning
    my being.
    But when I met you, I once again started believing.
    You have helped me more than you know.
    And one day that story will be told.

    I'm not a person who wants material things.
    I don't want glossy kisses and night clings.
    I'm a donor, not a taker,
    Just like I'm a listener, not a talker.
    There are few things I wish for,
    *Keep on reading if you want to know more.*

    I usually run from what I feel,
    But it has never felt this real.
    We started of strong,
    But I guess we were wrong.
    See! Why I'm afraid of commitment?
    I gave it all, my limit.
    I gave my heart for you to hold.
    It once was warm but now made cold.

    If only you could search my soul.
    And for once listen to the story being told.
    We don't talk for days on end.
    And when we finally get each other,
    You don't even act like my friend.
    Never mind my Love.
    And then!
    All night I lie awake,
    Thinking of the steps we once did take.
    Going over my every move,
    Wondering what I did wrong, what I can improve.
    Tears stream down my cheek,
    For my every move I feel critiqued.

    I just don't understand.
    One day you stand tall and hold my hand.
    But the next I'm felt with the feeling of blue.
    Without a heads up or even a clue.
    It's like I'm on a emotional roller-coaster,
    With all these ups-downs,
    And turns around.

    Heyy dear! Forget all that.
    Now,
    I want to be the person you confined in.
    The person who wipes the tears and creates grin.
    I want to be the one you call,
    When you're not sure you can stand tall.
    I want to be there for you no matter what happens.
    I might not be able to advice,
    But I promise you I'll try to be concise.
    But most of all I want you to be happy,
    Especially... With me.

    I'm sorry if this made you upset,
    But I had to get it off my chest.
    Now you know exactly how I feel,
    You hold the cards, and it's time to deal.
    Every word I said is true,
    Now dear! The rest is upto you...!!

    ~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~
    When you read this you'll wonder, "Who did he
    write it to?"
    I want you to know, I wrote it JUST FOR YOU...!!


    @mirakee @mirakeeworld @writersnetwork @writerstolli #pod #mirakee_reposters #mirakee #writersnetwork #writerstolli #friend #untold #love

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    BUT YOU AND I ARE NOT WRITTEN

    We both have scars,
    With memories that can't be erased.
    But together we're stronger,
    In your hands my heart has been placed...!!
    ©the_alchemiist

  • yoona21 9w

    _My HEART_
    ♥️♥️


    My heart is broken,
    Let me pick them again
    Let me chain them together,
    Let me,just let me once
    My heart is shivered
    Let me pile up again
    Let me bind them again
    Just let me
    Let me once
    ©yoona21

  • nilayrawal 10w

    Untold story

    Unsharpen dreams are like untold stories..
    ©smart_nr

  • rawlollipop_360 10w

    #haiku #pod #untold
    The trials of an untold story or secret.

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    Secret

    A story untold
    Brightens up the weary soul
    But leaves the heart alone

  • hyungrah 8w

    Feel

    I felt so much that i started to feel nothing

  • b_geet 11w

    Untold Truth

    You are a delicate imprint on my heart,
    Which is hard to bear but harder to remove...
    ©b_geet

  • azaadshaik 12w

    Aaj kal mera dil bhi mujhse bewafa hone laga

    Khud ke liye chod kar kisi aur ke liye dhadak ne laga

    ©azaadshaik

  • ink_empress 12w

    6TH MARCH TALES OF DESUA
    UNTOLD HURTS


    I was a good girl, I never skipped a Sunday in church, I was a virgin too,i was innocent!
    Did grandma have to come?
    Did she have to use her drugs unfailingly that night? No I don't hate her, it was coincidence I guess
    I was brave, brave it was my environment and I was free from harm
    it was 3 days to my 16th birthday, a party was planned.Alas Mommy's little girl was finally sixteen ,my heart lept for joy unknowingly it was going to be my last true joy
    They were 3,3 against my tiny self. I fought, I must confess I fought really hard
    They overpowered me, they took my Pride, psalm 91 forsaked me
    I saw myself as dirty, coming from a strict family I couldn't speak, nobody was going to listen.. I needed help, I needed love, I needed God to take my life
    My dreams were tormented, my thoughts dark
    Suicidal thoughts came in, the urge only stronger than ever but all attempts failed
    God sent him!Ayodeji came through few months later and like a flood he wiped my pain. He thought me to be only but a stronger person and woman
    He spoke life to me, my infinity I'd never forget
    A PAIN NEVER TO BE FORGOTTEN
    TO BE TOLD ONLY WHEN I AM EIGHTEEN
    #14th March 2018#