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  • orfayus 3d

    Coal Belt Mentality

    Coiran
    And veins of
    Steel tracks
    Riding the heights
    Of despair
    And a tearing
    Inkling of coal
    Miner
    Mentality
    Defeatist failures and
    Wresting the trigger-
    A typewriter
    Can't stay the
    Insatiable
    Day eating away
    At your heart
    There is a trouble
    With being born
    And torn apart
    By the meaningless
    Nothingness

    Insta: @orfayus

    ©orfayus

  • ambi_16 4d



    ©ambi

  • anonymous_562 16w

    Cricket is quite boring without commentary
    Similarly,
    Life is boring without listening to our haters commentary ! ...
    So thanks to our haters, for
    Indirectly correcting us!...
    ©anonymous_562

  • jereme_palos 20w

    Written entries . Part three ( # 3 ) . < < A lot of reading . >> Reflective .

    A writer does not have to write with the highest

    level of literacy and vocabulary within every

    form of writing .

    An orator does not have to speak with the

    highest quality of oration within every

    conversation and speech .


    As within an AA ( Alcoholic ' s Anonymous ) or

    within an NA ( Narcotics Anonymous ) course ;

    Denial of the fact that The Holy Spirit does exist

    is additional evidence that HE does exist , A soul

    of whom speaks and says that The Holy Spirit ,

    God or The Son of The Living God does not exist

    ; The soul is providing additional evidence

    toward that fact that HE ( The Holy Spirit ) does

    exist , Science has proven that fact that God

    does exist . 2 Timothy 3 : 5 . Please read 2

    Timothy 3 : 5 . 2 Timothy 3 : 5 - Having a form of

    godliness ( goodness ) and denying the power of

    good that came from , originated and is

    energized by The Holy Spirit , Good or goodness

    is from The Holy Spirit . Good or goodness =

    Good or goodness . Flesh and sin = flesh and sin .

    Evil = evil . Flesh and sin are not evil . Flesh and

    sin are internal ( internal behavior ) and external

    ( external behavior ) via behavior . A belief does

    not alter a fact . Science has proven the fact that

    The Holy Spirit does exist via the fruits of the

    spirit documented within the book of Galatians .

    Chapter 5 within the book of Galatians . Please

    substitute The Holy Spirit in the locations that

    the word spirit is written . The Holy Spirit truly

    does exist whether a soul believes in him or not .

    A fact is that The Holy Spirit does exist . A

    creative story - Person A : Does the holy spirit

    exist ? Person B : Yes , the holy spirit does exist

    and that would be a historically documented

    fact .



    A creative story . Person A : Does the holy spirit

    exist ? Person B : Yes , the holy spirit does exist

    and that would be a historically documented

    fact .



    The counter debate is actually a debate toward

    The fact that The Holy Spirit does exist .

    There is not any counter debate .

    The counter debate provides further and

    additional evidence toward the fact that The Holy

    Spirit does

    exist .

    Similar of the scenario within an AA or NA

    course .

    #Apologetic .

    Please have an enjoyable Thanksgiving and Christmas . ( ^ __ ^ ) .

  • jereme_palos 20w

    Written entries . Part two ( # 2 ) . << A lot of reading . >> Reflective .

    The Son of The Living God endured Matthew 5 :

    10 - 11 and provided additional evidence of the

    gospel . Matthew 5 : 10 was a verbal counseling

    and blessing received prior to Christ enduring

    the crucifixion . ? He was also blessed within the

    scenario of the alabaster jar ; the scenario

    happened prior the event of the crucifixion .

    The Son of The Living God spoke and provided

    the beatitudes , was eternally anointed via the

    alabaster jar being poured on him and then

    endured the event that was previously taught to

    happen . The alabaster jar could have been

    anointed upon The Son of The Living God so the

    pain He would endure within the next

    historically documented event known ( whipped

    , beaten and scourged ) as the crucifixion would

    be reduced . ? She was medically and spiritually

    anointing him , spiritually and eternally blessing

    him , psychologically preparing him , grieving

    alongside him and reducing the pain that The

    Son of The Living God would endure within the

    next event . ? Christ Jesus expressed

    tremendous self control and self restraint

    during the scenarios within the event of his

    crucifixion ; He held divine power and could

    easily activate that power . An example of the

    power he could have activated was displayed

    after the completion of the crucifixion ; the

    giant earthquake . Christ Jesus could have

    activated a giant earthquake instead of

    enduring the crucifixion .



    The Holy Spirit endured the crucifixion so

    eternal life would be provided and so devout

    believe of eternal life would increase . The Holy

    Spirit was also closing , finishing and completing

    the supernatural and eternal court case ; he was

    multiplying and storing eternal wrath ( turning

    the other cheek and providing the tunic ; this

    was taught so a persecuted person would win

    within the court system ) within the event of

    eternal judgment . In addition , He was

    performing an act of atonement due to the

    previous judgments that he had been involved (

    Noah , Moses alongside Aaron and the wicked

    pharaoh , Sodom and Gomorrah , etc... ) within ;

    alongside atonement of the event held within

    the future discerned as eternal judgment . The

    Son of The Living God provided a supernaturally

    royal amount of evidence that eternal life does

    exist . He provided this evidence via the

    crucifixion , resurrection and the ascension ,

    alongside the miraculous gift of sobriety . A

    miraculous gift provided during Pentecost , ( the

    book of ACTS ) as evidence of Christ Jesus '

    ascension . The gift of sobriety is evidence of

    The Holy Ghost ' s royal power , eternal

    existence and supernatural victory . The Holy

    Spirit was prior Christ ' s crucifixion and The

    Holy Ghost was around the events of the

    entombment , resurrection and ascension ?



    Christ had The Holy Spirit and The Holy Ghost

    intertwined within his personal soul ; during the

    crucifixion , entombment , resurrection and

    ascension ? Within The Son of The Living God ‘s

    physical and earthly ministry ( around and over 2
    , 000 years ago ) he was provided a baptism by

    his cousin John The Baptist . During a number

    of historical events ; The Holy Spark within

    Christ Jesus was increased .



    HE could have had The Holy Spirit and The Holy

    Ghost intertwined within his soul ? Additionally ,

    during the large earthquake ; the 2 separated

    into the tomb and into heaven ? Afterwards and

    during the resurrection , they both reunited

    within Christ ' s personal body and that resulted

    in the large stone in front of the tomb being

    moved ? The Holy Ghost is the resurrected

    version of The Holy Spirit ; The second Holy

    Spirit or The revived Holy Spirit ? The Son of The

    Living God is The second Adam ; The revived

    Adam or the reincarnated Adam ? The Son of

    The Living God is a portion ( an eternal spark

    and flame ) of the eternal spark and flame that

    resides within The Father . ? The Holy Ghost

    captures the miniature spark ( interwoven

    within the body : thought process , conscience ,

    soul and spirit ) also known as the internal

    mirror reflection of The Holy Spirit ? The Holy

    Spirit within a person transforms into a Holy

    Ghost and the intertwined combination (

    miniature spark or mirrored reflection ) of The

    Holy Spirit and Holy Ghost within ( the thought

    process ) are transported to the eternal

    judgment that results in eternal life ? The

    eternally saved souls of whom were provided

    eternal life are living within heaven . ? The souls

    of whom did not receive eternal life are waiting

    the resurrection and the holy judgment of God '
    s righteous anger alongside his eternal justice ;

    the supernatural lake of brimstone and fire ?



    The Holy Spirit around and within the spark

    transforms into a Holy Ghost ; The Holy Ghost

    within heaven
    captures and transports the newly formed

    combination toward the judgment alongside

    heaven .



    Does reincarnation exist ? I do not have that

    knowledge although I would not doubt that

    reincarnation exists for a number of

    sparks ; not every spark . Unless a person

    considers and believes reincarnation being

    gifted eternal life
    within heaven . ? Reincarnation within present

    earth ? Reincarnation into heaven alongside the eternal

    body gifted by The Holy Spirit ? Re birthed into

    heaven and provided eternal life after the event of
    judgment ? Spiritually and physically re birthed

    onto earth ?


    Re birthed , reincarnated , transformed during

    the eternal ceremony or provided the eternal

    body after

    the return of The Son of The Living God ? The

    rapture and awaiting The Son of The Living God ‘ s return

    alongside the eternal judgment is a primary

    tenet of the belief .


    Reincarnation could also have been a counseling , apologetic and evangelist ‘ s discussion

    provided by
    The Apostle Paul as a way to convert and guide

    non believers toward believing ; could have also been

    finding friends and entertaining them with

    intellectual conversations about a man of whom

    was proven

    to exist although he was physically deceased .

    The man given the title of The Christ could gift sobriety because he was The Son of The Living

    God and
    held The Creator within him ; he could perform

    miracles . A little bit more than a trinity :

    The Father , The Son , The Holy Spirit , The Holy

    Ghost , 1st Adam , 2nd Adam . 1st Adam and

    2nd Adam
    are the same ? Eve was within heaven while

    Christ Jesus walked with The Apostles ?




    Additional .

    New born baby that did not physically live

    through child birth ?

    A supernatural and spiritually reversed birth .

    Baby welcomes the parent ( s ) into the Kingdom

    of heaven .

    Baby is on the inside of the kingdom of heaven

    and doors open :

    Inward , upward , outward , sideways and

    diagonally .

    Birthed into heaven after the baby was and is

    rebirthed into heaven .

    Birthed into heaven after the event of eternal

    judgment ;

    after the return of The Son of The Living God .


    Adam and the 2nd Adam are the same exact

    Adam ?

    Eve was waiting in paradise while Adam was

    walking alongside The Apostles ; while Adam

    was
    ministering with The Apostles .

    Adam was a lesser and younger version of God . ?

    Adam was a lesser and younger version of The

    Holy Spirit . ?

    Adam was a lesser and younger version of The

    Almighty . ?

    Adam was a galaxy within the endless omniverse

    ; a lesser version of The Father . ?

    Adam was a lesser and younger version of God

    The Father .

    Adam reappeared so the eternal and

    supernatural court case would be completed ;

    would be finished .

    The ( already dissolved within the lake of fire )

    devil committed the wicked act twice .

    Adam was physically , personally and directly

    persecuted at least twice by the ( already

    dissolved

    within the lake of fire ) devil .

    Adam and Eve have endured persecution since

    the scenario and event historically documented

    within the book of Genesis .

    Additional evidence was obtained and the (

    already dissolved within the lake of fire ) devil

    was found

    as temporarily guilty and eternally guilty . ?

    The ( already dissolved within the lake of fire )

    devil committed 1st , 2nd and 3rd degree

    homicide ;

    Adam and Eve as well as the 2nd Adam . ?

    Adam reborn , rebirthed , reincarnated ,

    reappearing , rematerialized . ?

    Adam was the only reincarnated being to ever

    exist . ?

    Eve was the eternal spirit ( within paradise ) of

    whom outpoured and sent The Eternal Dove to

    Christ

    while he was being baptized within the water ;

    John The Baptist was baptizing him . ?

    The 3rd appearance of Adam is the Return of

    The Son of The Living God and the event of eternal

    judgment alongside the eternal reward ceremony .

    Poetry , entertainment , theology , spirituality , evangelism ,
    counseling , apologetics , creative writing .


    A number of souls could be reincarnated as :

    clouds , space clouds , stars , moons , shooting

    stars or

    weather within space . ?

  • jereme_palos 20w

    Written entries . < < A lot of reading . > >

    YOUR PRAYER CHANGES EVERYTHING... Be

    Strong and see your prayer be created before

    your eyes in this Life or The Next One When We

    Are Physically Alongside Him... He Is Always By

    Your Side... Closer To You Than The Sunlight,

    Than This Post and Even Closer To You Than

    Your Heart Can Beat . Do Not Worry... You Got

    This . #Prayer . #Faith . #Live . #Love .

    #Happiness . #Wisdom . #Purity . Eternal

    happiness can only be obtained when one

    chooses to guard their heart and have it be

    guarded by others... but you still must guard it

    yourself . #SeekLife .


    100% supportive of free and equal .

    100% supportive of equal rights .

    100% supportive of human rights .

    100% supportive of The Legal System .

    100% supportive of PETA .

    100% supportive of Defenders of Wildlife .

    100% supportive of Wounded Warriors .

    100% supportive of Air1 .

    100% supportive of abolitionism .

    100% supportive of sobriety .

    100% supportive of vegetables, vitamins and

    water .

    100% supportive of responsibility and maturity .

    100 % supportive of health and safety .

    100% supportive of babies .

    100% supportive of The Constitution of The

    United States of America .

    100% supportive of God and a chaplain within

    the school curriculum .

    Guidance .

    Write to decrease the crime rate .


    Pro life and pro choice .

    Primarily pro life, then pro choice .

    Be both .

    Both , yet pro life .

    100% Supportive of CPS and CPA .

    That is always present .


    Language does equal behavior .

    Cross and Jesus did not accomplish much ? The

    cross and Jesus have provided sobriety to many .

    Multiple proven and documented miracles

    within reality . The Holy Spirit does exist . The

    Holy Spirit does gift personal freedom .

    Sobriety is a true blessing , gift and miracle of

    God . Please request that blessing .



    Viewing and hearing of a false Christ provides

    evidence of The Holy Scriptures... Whether the

    person is applying reverse and societal

    psychology , trolling , or not psychologically

    healthy . Persons claiming and pretending to be

    Christ are only providing evidence of The Holy

    Scriptures . A devout believer being bullied due

    to personal faith is additional evidence of The

    Holy Scriptures . Stop the bullying .

    Matthew 5 : 11 . Scenario of a devout believer

    being bullied proves the Holy Scriptures . Speak

    up, stand up, and speak out about the bullying .

    Be a continual eye witness . Bullying is not

    healthy .

    The fruits of the spirit written and documented

    within the book of Galatians can be clearly seen

    within the behavior a person and within self .

    Additional evidence that proves The Holy Spirit

    does exist . Please be responsible . Eternal life

    does exist .


    The writings of Apostle Paul documented within

    the book of 2 Corinthians chapter 13 : Verses 5 -

    11 . Personal examination of the faith , eternally

    gifted promise of salvation , personal behavior

    and The indwelling of Holy Spirit . Please

    substitute the phrase Christ Jesus with The Holy

    Spirit . Verse 5 : Examine yourselves to see

    whether you are in the faith; test yourselves . Do

    you not realize that Christ Jesus is in you —

    unless , of course , you fail the test ? Verse 6 :

    And I trust that you will discover that we have

    not failed the test . Additional evidence that The

    Holy Spirit does exist . A believer can observe

    whether another person retains the fruits of the

    spirit documented within the book of Galatians

    via a person's behavior . Galatians 5 : 22 - 26 .

    100 % supportive of The Exodus Road . 100%

    supportive of a healthy environment. 100%

    supportive of sobriety . 100% supportive of fire

    safety . 100% supportive of responsible

    education .

    100% supportive of NAMI .

    Biblical story .

    Christ carrying the cross and walking to the

    mountain .

    A viewer deeply grieves , mourns and weeps .

    An angel speaks and the viewer discerns the

    angel’s voice .

    “ He of whom presently carries the cross and

    wears the crown of thorns gifted every thought

    process “ .

    Christ stumbles to the ground with the cross.

    “ They are going to find out soon because He

    shall be resurrected and return upon clouds of

    glory “ .

    “ The 2nd Adam . The Christ . The Holy Spirit .

    The Son of The Living God shall return and arrive

    with eternal glory “ .

    The angels , Christ , and the crowd grieved ,

    mourned and wept together .

    After the angel finished speaking and providing

    counsel .

    Christ stands up , picks up the cross , continues

    walking and then stumbles .

    Simon appears , helps Christ up and carries the

    cross with him .

    Simon was the good Samaritan and good

    neighbor that helped Christ .

    An angel ?

    Melchizedek ?

    John The Baptist reappearing to help Christ ?

    Joseph appearing to help Christ ? Christ’s

    earthly father .

    Joseph appearing to help Christ ? The son of

    Jacob .

    Jacob appearing to help Christ ?

    Job appearing to help Christ ?

    Joshua appearing to help Christ ?

    Moses appearing to help Christ ?

    Elijah appearing to help Christ ?

    Elisha appearing to help Christ ?

    Isaiah appearing to help Christ ?

    Abraham appearing to help Christ ?

    Noah appearing to help Christ ?

    Enoch appearing to help Christ ?

    Caleb appearing to help Christ ?

    Lot appearing to help Christ ?

    Adam appearing to help Christ ?

    Methuselah appearing to help Christ ?

    Daniel appearing to help Christ ?

    A cured and recovered Simon the leper

    appearing to help Christ ?

    Simon was Christ ’ s warmth and reduced the pain

    He was enduring .

    Christ was enduring pain and Simon reduced the

    pain endured .

    Simon was a mixture of emotions and thoughts

    that were within Christ .

    Simon and Simon Peter the apostle .

    The father arranged Simon to appear .

    The father was comforting and counseling

    Christ Jesus with Simon .

    Christ would have endured harsher torture if

    Simon The Cyrene had not appeared . Written by

    Jereme Joel Palos .

    100% supportive of Amnesty .

    Prayer alters every thing and item because of

    the thermodynamic ( physics ) verbal heat

    energy released while praying . #Science .

    Short Story :

    Does The Holy Spirit exist ?

    Yes , The Holy Spirit does exist and that would

    be a fact .

    Gay Straight Alliance . LGBT and Straight

    Alliance . Straight and LGBT Alliance . Human

    Rights . Equal Rights . Equality . #TheHolySpirit .

  • thebhavnasaxena 47w

    Endure

    Angels' tears, a silent
    Mutiny, saints lie wounded
    And smiles are lost,
    No birds chirp in the gardens,
    Flowers have withered in
    Their beds, and even the
    Sunlight is just a beam of
    Mind numbing darkness in a
    Poisoned paradise; who plucked
    Their wings away, stole their voices?
    Maimed, the angels weep; who has
    Painted heaven in crimson vengeance,
    Is it fate that plays tricks, that
    Even Eden can't escape, or mayhap
    These are the bad dreams
    That even the Gods must endure?
    ©thebhavnasaxena

  • ___dr_soham_mitra___ 63w

    The Holy War

    People hate that which they do not understand.
    They are willing to kill to attest their piousness.
    Governments propagate this hate under the false guise of patriotic zeal and pride, so as to facilitate and realize their own aquisitive agendas.
    The juggernaut engulfs land, money, resources and power and belches out poison.
    Millions willfully rush towards the awaiting arms of death, like brainless minions.
    ©___dr_soham_mitra___

  • magnifying_truth 67w

    I'm scared
    But not of a monster
    Because monsters aren't real
    Monsters are things we create to feel better about ourselves
    To feel better about our actions and lives
    Lives that have been made monotonous by what society calls success
    Succes that doesn't lead to happiness
    Happiness that isn't possible anymore
    And I'm scared
    Because I'm not happy
    And my life has yet to begin
    ©magnifying_truth

  • writeranavah 78w

    The bronze crucifix
    Shining gold
    Holding a tiny man
    With pierced hands
    Pierced feet

    That bronze crucifix
    At the centre of an altar
    An altar cluttered with
    Large volumes
    Telling different stories

    Who remembers the story
    Of that tiny tiny man
    Thirty years, dipped in a river
    Once fabled to cure
    An incurable disease?

    The tiny man didn't dip thrice
    Because a voice was heard
    The very first time
    And the tiny man rose
    To conquer an enemy

    I am the enemy
    We are the enemy
    Who put to death
    The thought of love
    Over ceremony

    We all love a ceremony
    And we make that tiny man
    The centre of it all
    Singing praises
    For a day, just a day

    We are the enemy
    That chose brick walls
    Over a brotherly hug
    And the tiny man stands
    Waiting to judge
    ©anna_grace
    #crucifix #jesus #christian #cross #commentary @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunite @hovah_

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    The Judge

    We are the enemy
    That chose brick walls
    Over a brotherly hug
    And the tiny man stands
    Waiting to judge

    (See Caption)
    ©anna_grace

  • neroamee_alucard 84w

    Slammed

    How do you expect
    People to walk into a door
    When with your words
    You've slammed it in their face?
    That's a clear sign
    That you don't want me here

    You don't want me here
    Despite the tenets of your faith
    You ignore the sacred texts you claim
    To model your life by
    And you have the nerve to preach
    The doctrine of love, unabashed and unconditional
    And eternal peace?
    ©neroamee_alucard

  • tristadaniell 121w

    The greatest failure of man is to become that which he claims to abhor...

    Your excuses for men who rape are as valid as the excuses for people who hate. If you're more concerned with why women wait so long to speak out vs why SO MANY WOMEN HAVE THESE EXPERIENCES then your focus is waaaaaaaayyyyyyy off!

    What would the world be if instead of checking, blaming accusing, and condemning women for not doing enough to protect ourselves from or prevent rape (or for not speaking out as soon as it happens and providing a full video account, three witnesses, skin from the rapist, surveillance footage, all transcripts of any phone or text messages between you and the rapist, character witnesses, your complete sexual history, and half your soul to PROVE said rape happened) guys actually checked other guys on rape culture and predatory behavior?!

    �� WHY ARE YOU MEN NOT TALKING TO OTHER MEN ABOUT WHY SO MANY WOMEN HAVE THESE HORRENDOUS ASS STORIES!?!?!

    Because if it was your daughter......��

    STOP FOCUSING YOUR EFFORTS ON WOMEN AND FOCUS YOUR EFFORTS TO EDUCATE MEN TO NOT BE SEXUAL PREDATORS! Sexual assault was so common growing up I remember sitting around a table of girls in elementary and us talking about our abuse like it was a natural f'n thing and none of us flinched.....wow. I weep for the little girls we left behind....(and the little boys who endure too). #TristaDaniell #USA #blackwriters #BlackPoets #rape #metoo #billcosby #kavenaugh #women #men #rapesurvivors #harvyweinstein #truth #opinions #socialcommentary #sexualpredators #sex #consent #monday #writingcommunity #writersofinstagram #commentary #totd #unpopularopinion #untwinemeafrica #mirakee #mysticmessenger #mystic #healer #male #female #union #unity

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    Deception.

    He shouldn't have run.
    She shouldn't have gone.
    He shouldn't have worn a hoodie.
    She shouldn't dress like that.
    Look at his record, he was clearly a thug...
    Look at her past, she was clearly a whore....
    He had drugs in his system...
    She was drunk and high...
    LOOK AT HIM! HE LOOKS LIKE A THUG!
    LOOK AT HER! SHE DRESSES LIKE A SLUT!
    He's just trying to ruin a good [white] man's name!
    She's just trying to ruin a good [black] man's name!
    That nigger is lying! He got what he deserved!
    (Murder)
    That bitch is lying! She got what she wanted!
    (Rape)
    White people are abused by police too!
    Men are raped too!
    He resisted arrest!
    She insisted on sex!
    Slavery happened, it's done. Get over it.
    She was raped 20 years ago, it's done. Get over it.
    Black people are too sensitive about these issues.
    Women are too sensitive about these issues.
    People are killed everyday, get over it.
    Women are raped everyday, get over it.
    Why did he run if he wasn't guilty? He did something.
    Why did she go over there if she didn't want to have sex? She wanted it.
    ...
    ...
    ...
    Failure.
    ©tristadaniell
    Trista.Daniell (IG)
    www.TristaDaniell.com

  • kavarastories 224w

    The Cuckoo Bird

    There was a flower who knew an owl whose favorite place was the zoo

    The owl’s friend, the cuckoo bird, was a covert bringer of news

    She would drop the news in the monkeys’ pen at just the crack of dawn

    And fly to lands far away, over the pandas and hippos and swans

    The owl would come and perch itself on a sturdy branch of oak

    To watch the monkeys hoot and holler and cast their dirty jokes

    The frogs would hear and deem them shallow, what imbeciles, those senseless clowns

    The frogs complain to the elephant’s ears, and soon after their trunks do sound

    The lions rage, the trees shake, the zoo keepers become alarmed

    Maybe they’re sick? Maybe they’re hungry? The keepers feed them farms

    The monkeys feast, the pigs are greased, the zoo is once again sound

    And again will come the cuckoo bird, covered in the darkness of dawn

    And the owl will sit on its branch of oak and the flower will remain in the ground

    -KavaraStories