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sitting in front
of the mirror,
i talked to the one
on the other side,
and realised,
it's never the world
we lie to,
it's our own
reflection.
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#kriti11
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Read MoreThis world is what we see it is, it's our reflection��
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#reflection #pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunite -
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How would we end up being together ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitelet's be wild and poetic
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- indeed @artemiswrites @odysseus @soulfulstirrings @justhannah @dusky_dawn
- indeed @allbymyself @twinkling_girl @anandarupa_chakrabarti @naheen_zaara @lacymark
- john_solomon Yes, let's all do that for sure, little brother
- blue_lemon_writes
- solace What a party
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This one is very close to me ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitea river without water;
a river that's cursed.
a poet without words;
a poet that hushed.
an evening without sunset;
an evening in vain.
a night without stars;
a night of dark's reign.
a rainbow without colours;
a rainbow so despaired.
a nature without life;
a nature, deep impaired.
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- indeed @passionbookworm thank you so much
- whatever_feels Wow!
- john_solomon I beg to differ with the rest who commented. This is beyond amazing little bro!
- aaditya Lang Leav vibes❤
- dusky_dawn Woah!!
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ab ye dil,
toota hi sahi,
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t̶h̶e̶.̶b̶l̶e̶e̶d̶i̶n̶g̶.̶h̶e̶a̶r̶t̶ -
the_bleeding_heart
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Read MoreSo, this user seems to be someone you have already seen or known on this app? Oh well I am the same Abhishek Dubey of @indeed just an account to post my Hindi write-ups.
What was the need?
Well, when I think of something in Hindi, I try translating it in English to see how it conveys I can convey the same message in other language. But sometimes, MY THOUGHTS ARE EASILY TRANSLATED, BUT THEY LOSE THEIR TRUE ESSENCE. And so o thought to post my thoughts not in a language I wish to, but in a language they can express themselves the best.
( More importantly, I wanted to create a separate account for my Hindi write-ups ��)
How often will I be available on this account?
I don't know �� whenever I'll have a thought in Hindi, I'll post it here and leave, and again login to my @indeed account. So PLEASE TAG OR MENTION ME BY TAGGING @indeed AND NOT THIS ONE. I'LL REPOST HINDI WRITE-UPS HERE (not only Hindi, but mostly Hindi)
Hope to get the same love here too ����
#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitekhwaahish hi kuchh aisi thi,
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t̶h̶e̶.̶b̶l̶e̶e̶d̶i̶n̶g̶.̶h̶e̶a̶r̶t̶ -
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Tried to compress my emotions in six words. Hope you get it ����
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #sixwordstories #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitethorns are path.
petals, the reward.
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That's what I always noticed, that's what I did ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteuniteyou will always find a depressed soul
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- doshimeghana7 Agreed
- helena Yes b
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pacific
Yeah that's usually the case
@tortoise Thanks for the tag ! - preetkanwal Very true
- ak_anjali_daydreamzz Yes ♥️
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Less of a write-up, more of what I am feeling these days ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitenow for once,
keep aside what you feel
and demand for what you deserve.
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- indeed @tengoku Arre no I never meant to embarrass it's alright, even I am not on time and it's never about time. I am glad you read my work, and you support whenever you read what else I would wish for I am sorry my comment conveyed something that's false
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tengoku
Arey nooo
Nothing like that
You read my posts but I missed few of your latest just that's why I said..
And no need to thank me :))
I enjoy reading your posts! - the_bird_of_wonderland
- theuglyink ❤
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Something similar to my one of the previous posts ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteuniteand then,
there are mornings,
when i chose to write you
and set you free from
mortality.
and then,
there are nights,
when i burn my poetry,
to be free from loving you
till eternity.
in between,
there are evenings,
when i read what i've been writing
and when i do, i search for
you in me.
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- indeed @theuglyink glad you liked it
- spicy_sugar Beautiful
- indeed @spicy_sugar thank you so much
- blue_lemon_writes Loved it
- passionbookworm Saved! ❤️
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I guess I just wrote something that will last forever, my scars.
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitethe scars won't heal,
the heart will bleed,
until my words don't reach
to the one i need.
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- indeed @john_solomon happy to see your comment thank you so much
- mahtobpensdown Profound ❤️❤️
- indeed @mahtobpensdown thank you so much
- tengoku Beautiful
- pennyoddon Beautiful
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your departure still hurts,
as i hoped of an eternity
with you. but it's fine...
as all i really wished for
was just a chance to love you.
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Thoughts and prayers
These years go by fast but it all seems so slow
This body of mine is tired but the mind is still on the go
I have no calendars only goals
More water to this plant as it seems not to grow
Failure and obstacles seems to slow me down
But more and more, I scream half dead to life
It can’t break my spirit neither my fight
Long days and longer nights
Nothing breaks the spirit of this hungry knight
Still I cry to He above the skies
Give me strength so I can fight
Grant me wings so I may fly
Before my enemies let me dine
On these days of night, strengthen my sight
Still to He I plead
On these decades of months
On these months of hours
And on these hours like seconds
Grant me the harvest of millenniums in this single life
©athier_ghalib -
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I made it comfortable for me this time too...
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You know, the last few posts on my account were loved so much by you all on Mirakee, I thank you all for this. My notification area was flooded with your love as likes, reposted, comments and follows. Thank you so much everyone and much love to you all ������
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteuniteyou quenched my droughts
with your raining love.
you made my autumns
as beautiful the spring you are.
you made my winters
melt under your warmth.
you left me in summers,
and i made myself
cold-blooded.
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tengoku
@dusky_dawn
Thank you for the tag :)) - _sparkling_soul Wow❤
- preetkanwal Wowsome 🔥🔥🔥
- kosachaya Wow ♥️♥️
- indeed @dusky_dawn Thank you so much for this kind gesture by you dear
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tengoku
@dusky_dawn
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"are you in love,
or are you lonely?"
"i am in love,
and my love is lonely."
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- ak_anjali_daydreamzz Yes... I'm in love and my love is lonely
- eyeslove Too deep❤❤loved it❤
- john_solomon Was going through notifications and got a stange one, it said that you had sent me a personal note, (didn't even know we could do that here), anyway I tap on it and it says "personal note doesn't exist", strange .
- indeed @john_solomon Thank you for your appreciation for the post and regarding the personal note, I discovered a new feature of sending personal personal note on the app, and for testing the feature, I sent you a personal note wishing you good luck and thanking you for supporting me I didn't know why that message doesn't exist anymore. Maybe this feature on the app isn't functioning the right way
- john_solomon Yeah could be, thanks for clearing that up for me and it's my pleasure to support you and I also appreciate you support friend
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Even in my last breaths, I'll pray for your immortality ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunite...
even in my last wish,
i wrote you an immortality.
and they said, that day
love was proud of me.
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- smi_vaid Nice
- dusky_dawn ♥♥
- passionbookworm Damn!!!!!!!!
- _sparkling_soul Saved
- the_spellbound_soul Loved it
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I wish to get lost in you, with the hope of never being found ♥
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitei wish to get lost,
get lost in you,
carrying your essence,
in every breeze that blew,
in every affection
of your lovely embrace,
in the feathers, so delicate,
that fall with your grace,
in all those promises
that keep our love abound,
i wish to get lost in you,
with the hope of
never being found...
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- shegram This melted my heart! So visually appealing and your words, divine!❤❤❤
- k_kshitij Lovely ❤️
- rumanrulesneverend Beautiful
- the_bird_of_wonderland Beautiful
- curious_sammie ❤️
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I smiled, it reminded me of you ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitewalking, on one autumn breeze,
when a leaf was about to fall
i heard it talking to the tree,
"oh darling,
we are never two different souls.
please don't miss me,
you no more can ever kiss me.
tragedy was our destiny."
i smiled,
it reminded me of you...
guess what? the next day,
the street was buried in dried leaves' array,
and they lied
that the tree never regret losing a leaf.
oh love of mine,
i swept the street till the evening's nine.
it's love never dried.
autumn was blamed, the tree cried.
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staring at a starry sky,
when a star was falling down
i heard it talking to the sky,
"oh darling,
let me go.
we weren't made for each other,
we weren't made to be forever.
tragedy was our destiny."
i smiled,
it reminded me of you...
guess what? the next day,
the sun didn't shine, clouds were deep grey,
and they lied
that the sky never regrets losing a star.
oh love of mine,
i stood in the rain till the evening's nine.
its love never died.
it never rained, the sky cried.
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When you do something you love doing the most, you get less tired, even if you work more than your capability. This is because the more you do things you love, the more you feel relaxed.
For me, writing is solace. Since 2017, when I named myself and The Bleeding Heart, whenever I used to write something, I used to imagine myself in that situation. I used to go in a completely different world which is governed by my laws, the laws of love. It always relaxed me, and helped me bring out the best I had, on a paper. So comforting it was.
Guess what? Today at 1:28 am, I collected all my works' hard copies and let them burn. I set fire to the most important thing, 'Vo Insaan' ('That Person'; a poem by me), my longest and biggest work. I stood in front of the fire and absorbed the heat in the chilling cold and felt so comfortable.
The heat was so powerful, it kept me warm all night and 6:00 am morning felt no cold. It was like I was free; free as I had nothing interesting to do.
You know, why I am writing this here is because this was where I understood how it feels to be loved back. When I chose writing as my love, it loved me back, helped me imagine more and deeper. It taught me that to feel something, it isn't important for one to experience it first, not everytime. It helped me make different inferences of the same thing, as I learnt to look at the world through different dimensions.
And when I decided to get rid of it, to burn its existence in me, then too, all it gave me was comfort, as if it was remembering our togetherness, as if it was saying, "It's alright, whenever you need me again, I'll be there..." as the fire went cold, and cold, and I came back home.
I don't know how, but automatically I sat and penned this incident, this thought in my register. It happened so fast as if I was dying and needed a pen and a notebook for saving some breaths for myself. And finally, I smiled as I realised,
"Even if we decide to give up on those things we love the most, at last, we always end up coming back to them." I guess even though I gave up writing, writing didn't give up on me. And that's true love.
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunite...and that's true love.
i understood how it feels
to be love back.
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And just so that you know, I do have you on notifications dear so you don't really have to tag me. I've had you on notifications for a while now. ❣ - neha_sultanpuri Wow...
- solace Essence
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indeed
@neha_sultanpuri thank you
@solace
@daffodil_as_pheonix thank you so very much
@john_solomon glad you liked it , and yes I'll take care of it from now thank you so much
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john_solomon
Last stanza is
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And a very happy new year to my family here����
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitei was never free,
until i tied myself to poetry.
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Your heart is
The overpowering balance
Between the thin lines
Of love and hate
©poeticmemories
