Mirakee
If all the care and worries for me
was merely kindness of yours,
then I must say,
I should learn to differentiate,
and, that's alright!
#raven63
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Read MoreYou were supposed to be by my side,
we were supposed to hold hands,
and walk through hardships,
together,
remember?
But, that's alright!
If all your promises were to console me,
then I must say,
I found solace in them,
so, that's alright!
If all the care and worries for me
was merely kindness of yours,
then I must say,
I should learn to differentiate,
and, that's alright!
See, I've lived half of my life in void,
so, if you choose not to be even in the remaining half,
then I don't see it
changing my perspective of life in any way,
so, that's alright!
©sarbari_thinks
Just another #thoughtoftheday ��❤️
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We are liking your way of writing
Why don't you try to participate in the poetry contest?
Previously, we held many contests like this where winners got some cash prizes and e-certificates signed by an author and much more!
To know more, the Instagram handle is in the bio. Check immediately!⤴️ - sharmilajuliet Awesome ❤️❤️❤️
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Read More#mirakee #writersnetwork #ceesreposts #raven63 #yaminiread #writerstolli #pod #readwriteunite #fairytale @mirakee
Once upon a time
At a place not prime
Was sitting a silent lad
With expressions so sad
Who kept on throwing pebbles
Each of which caused a treble
Tears in eyes were tearing heart
In the meanwhile, passed a cart
Out of it stepped out a child
Spoke to lad in voice mild
What did happen or what not
Your forehead why burns so hot
Silence broke & followed a storm
Of some catharsis, it was an alarm
Showing him paper which he tore
Pronounced an oath to do no more
Child picked it up and began to see
With golden grades, it was his degree
Lad earned it but it earned him none
Repeated rejections shot him like gun
Stood up the lad and began to orate
The nectar of life he was to narrate
When he stopped, started an applause
With hands the men, animals with claws
Out of cart then emerged another
Lad could not expect some further
Guards jumped too and majesty to cling
To honour child prince & father, the king
Art of oratory had conquered their minds
A royal post offered with honour of kinds
It wasn't success but the failure rejected
Bloomed a victory from land once dejected
©captainfatimahabibaThe Later it comes
The Better it stays.
©captainfatimahabiba33 19 13
- shegram Wow, Cappie! What a beautiful short story! I loved it!
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@iam_rose @shaiz_fs @siddiqua_ @shivraj_singh @_mysoul
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@shegram
Thanksssssss a lot - zacksparrow Amazingly beautiful
- ishrat_zaman Wonderful dear
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- sharmilajuliet Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
- apurvascribbles Beautifully penned!
- sarbari_thinks @sharmilajuliet Thank you ❤️
- sarbari_thinks @apurvascribbles Thank you ❤️
- sharmilajuliet @sarbari_thinks you're most welcome ❤️
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The castle on the hilltop had stories to tell,
the stories only known to our grandparents.
The stories of the
Prince and Princesses,
Love and War,
Eternity and Transients;
stories of
Harmony and Hatred,
Grandeur and Austerity,
Solace and Hostility;
the stories which made our childhood memorable.
The castle witnessed numerous weddings,
of which we were a part too,
but, what happened to the Prince' and Princesses,
their love and romance,
their eternal stories of promises and solace,
the inevitable moral of their stories,
that harmony and austerity changes others perspective;
what happened to our childhood stories and their characters,
what happened to the storytellers and the listeners;
the castle on the hilltop had stories to tell.
©sarbari_thinks
It's Saturday but, nevermind. ��
@sayan_majhi
#poem2heart #abhimishra #javeriya #yaminiread #tanzread #sqb #ntm #danny_a #ummerveeri #ni8ngle #writersnetwork #writerstolli #pod #mirakee #writers_paradise #julietscorner #bluepup #aurbatao #raven63 #shaliya #mirakeewriter #odysseusThe castle on the hilltop had stories to tell.
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- umer__ Beautiful
- sarbari_thinks @sharmilajuliet thank you ❤️
- sarbari_thinks @umer__ thank you ❤️
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Chocolates, roses and cards,
with all the so-called "love art";
With all the chivalry and etiquette,
they shared caresses and "Gillette";
Talking in gibberish language,
they wanted acceptance of their love rage;
With cringy soft toys, a ring and flowers,
they proposed the significant other,
as if they didn't know the answer, whatsoever;
With freshly plucked roses,
they wanted their love to blossom forever;
They swore to the moon and stars,
never to go afar,
but, when time to prove their swear arrived,
when one tried not to let the other go,
breakup came to the rescue.
Did you notice, I didn't claim my non indulgence in promises, hugs and kisses,
for that would be a lie to the senses;
I might write about love and heartbreak,
but, I am not clichéd,
at least, not for love sake.
©sarbari_thinks
My submission for #cees_love_chall
Hope you'll like it ma'am.
#poetry #love #life #inspiration #thoughts #diary #humour #sarcasm #valentinesday #valentines_day
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#poem2heart #abhimishra #javeriya #yaminiread #tanzread #sqb #ntm #danny_a #ummerveeri #ni8ngle #writersnetwork #writerstolli #pod #mirakee #writers_paradise #julietscorner #bluepup #aurbatao #raven63 #shaliya #mirakeewriter #odysseusWith freshly plucked roses,
they wanted their love to blossom forever.51 7 20
- carolyns_challenges Happy to hear that.
- sqbscribbles *Did you notice, I didnt claim.
- sqbscribbles Amazing piece.
- sarbari_thinks @sqbscribbles I really needed help on that line... Thank you very much
- sarbari_thinks @sqbscribbles Thanks a lot ❤️
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#PulwamaAttack #BlackDay #IndianArmy #Indian_Army #Pulwama_Attack #Black_DayBlack Day
Valentine's Day is a myth for those who awaited meeting their valentines,
they waited for a phone call from them,
or a handwritten letter,
or even a message;
Valentines Day is a myth for those who waited for their valentines,
with mere photographs,
their old clothes,
and perfumes to remember their smell,
as each day passed by fading their redolence;
The real promise day for them was that day when their valentine promised to visit and couldn't make it;
Valentines Day is a myth for those who awaited that one day,
and finally when the day arrived,
it took severals away,
from their loved ones;
Valentines Day is a myth for those parents,
siblings,
wives,
betrothed,
friends,
well-wishers,
and for all the unnamed relations,
whose children,
brothers,
cousins,
husbands,
friends,
and the loved ones, went,
but, never came back;
And that one day was marked as
"Black Day".
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"The gift I hold,
sitting in front of an old river,
A gift that is unfold before me,
is not necessarily what I want to see.
Is it an umbrella or a shield,
not only it saves me from the sun, rain and wind,
but also from people who knew me but whom I didn't.
I'm before an old stagnant river, with an umbrella in my hand and the gift.
Your love is like feathers,
feathers that cushion me from any harm,
but now, the features couldn't even save me from your gift,
feathers that were supposed to be always alarmed.
It's not true that the moon won't follow me tonight,
It's not true that it'll leave me alone in the darkest hour of the night,
Though, it's true partly, as tonight is "New Moon",
and I am wondering about all these, sitting on my place; the stagnant old river side.
A raindrop or two,
who is this new?,
stay, for some more raindrops
but, far away, it goes by, taking you from me.
Whenever I felt your eyes on me,
Felt butterflies in my stomach,
Despite being miles apart, we danced in the rain together,
And I felt butterflies in my stomach.
Not a love song,
at least, not essentially so,
not a sad one either,
at least, not to let everyone know.
On a full moon night, with an umbrella I sat, feeling the raindrops on my feet;
I opened the gift of yours, feathers of love?
No! A song of sorrow, a song of remorse;
What I thought as a butterfly, turned out to be a moth, actually."
#p2h_vday_series
#ceesreposts #love #poetry #thoughts #diary #life #nature #inspiration #travel #friendship #abhimishra #javeriya #yaminiread #tanzread #sqb #ntm #danny_a #ummerveeri #ni8ngle #writersnetwork #writerstolli #pod #mirakee #writers_paradise #julietscorner #bluepup #aurbatao #raven63 #shaliya #mirakeewriter #odysseusA story revealed
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- sharmilajuliet Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
- sarbari_thinks @sharmilajuliet Thanks a lot ❤️
- sharmilajuliet @sarbari_thinks you're most welcome ❤️
- rashmi_jha Its lovely
- sarbari_thinks @rashmi_jha thank you ❤️
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@carolyns_challenges ma'am will you accept my late submission? I forgot about the time limit penning this down.
My late submission for #cees_adj_chall ��
Astonished is greatly surprised or impressed; amazed.
Effulgence is brightness taken to the extreme. You may be dazzled by it, stunned by it, or even overcome by it. Usually used to refer to the sun or some other mega-star, effulgence can also be used more figuratively.
Munificence is the quality or action of being extremely generous.
Redolence is fragrant or sweet smelling or strongly reminiscent or suggestive of.
Flamboyance is tending to attract attention because of their exuberance, confidence, and stylishness.
Lachrymose is tearful or given to weeping.
Histrionic is excessively theatrical or dramatic in character or style.
Meretricious is apparently attractive but having no real value.
Tremulous is shaking or quivering slightly or timid or nervous.
Insidious is proceeding in a gradual, subtle way, but with very harmful effects.
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#poem2heart #abhimishra #javeriya #yaminiread #tanzread #sqb #ntm #danny_a #ummerveeri #ni8ngle #writersnetwork #writerstolli #pod #mirakee #writers_paradise #julietscorner #bluepup #aurbatao #raven63 #shaliya #mirakeewriter #odysseusI was astonished by her effulgence,
and her voice of perception;
she shook me by her munificence in behaviour,
but the anecdotes of her redolence were merely flamboyance,
her lachrymose were only histrionic,
and what I regarded as sagacity was just meretricious;
her tremulous hands, insidious,
they held me just to push me away.
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- odysseus Amazing piece...
- sarbari_thinks @odysseus thank you so much sir ❤️
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indeed
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Read MoreThis world is what we see it is, it's our reflection��
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#reflection #pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitesitting in front
of the mirror,
i talked to the one
on the other side,
and realised,
it's never the world
we lie to,
it's our own
reflection.
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- monikakapur Very well said
- wind_chime7 Wonderful
- angel_love True
- john_solomon Agree little bro, we lie to ourselves quite often, perhaps some sort of defense mechanism. Well said my friend!
- passionbookworm Very true!
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Not a love song,
at least, not essentially so,
not a sad one either,
at least, not to let everyone know.
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Whenever I felt your eyes on me,
Felt butterflies in my stomach,
Despite being miles apart, we danced in the rain together,
And I felt butterflies in my stomach.
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#mirakee #writersnetwork #ceesreposts #raven63 #yaminiread #writerstolli #pod #readwriteunite #reflection
I have a mirror
You need not to tell me that,
Pimples appeared, the scars
prolonged.
I have a tailor
Whom I'm supposed to give
my measurements
You need not to tell me that,
I am grown chubbier, the weight
gained.
I have stood in rows
You need not to tell me that,
I should be going for this or
that much heels
I have a mirror
To show me my real appearance
I need not you
To detect the defects for deliverance
Not only me but every She,
primarily
Embrace her without braces,
no matter the tooth uneven
Hug her without drugs,
no matter the anxiety driven
Let her watch the bigger dreams
no matter if wears spectacles
Let her believe in imagination
no matter impossible in practical
©captainfatimahabibaMirror is hung to reflect the reality
and paralysis
Don't hang the one by reflecting
your analysis
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- john_solomon What a well crafted message the people really need to absorb and "embrace"! Really proud of you Fatima.
- john_solomon And yes perhaps you should tag me dear, I did NOT receive a notification for this.
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@john_solomon
I could notice bcz few others also missed your precious glance - twinkling_girl Woahhh amazing capti
- jnana_deva_shakti BRAVO! What moving verses❤️ a joy to read
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How would we end up being together ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitelet's be wild and poetic
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- indeed @artemiswrites @odysseus @soulfulstirrings @justhannah @dusky_dawn
- indeed @allbymyself @twinkling_girl @anandarupa_chakrabarti @naheen_zaara @lacymark
- john_solomon Yes, let's all do that for sure, little brother
- blue_lemon_writes
- solace What a party
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This one is very close to me ��
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #random #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitea river without water;
a river that's cursed.
a poet without words;
a poet that hushed.
an evening without sunset;
an evening in vain.
a night without stars;
a night of dark's reign.
a rainbow without colours;
a rainbow so despaired.
a nature without life;
a nature, deep impaired.
;
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- passionbookworm Amazing
- indeed @passionbookworm thank you so much
- whatever_feels Wow!
- john_solomon I beg to differ with the rest who commented. This is beyond amazing little bro!
- aaditya Lang Leav vibes❤
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Counter Soliloquy
Mind : ah, I sense it's raining.
Heart: yeah, I too can detect.
Mind: what causes such a shower fall so harmoniously?
Heart: harmoniously! You're deaf perhaps for the thunder it roars squeezes me to chaos.
Mind: oh you touch_me_not creature.
Heart: touch_me_not is better than embracing me and leaving me crumbled.
Mind: you are not a separate entity, we both share a common cage.
Heart: cage! This time you seem spitting out some truth... we're imprisoned indeed, a universe we owe inside us each that is most of the time in conflict with the other; you are haunted by reason while I'm hunted by desire and yes you win the most.
Mind: Do you mean only the man possess me or yours is only a woman?
Heart: well symbolically it could be so.
Mind: symbolically?
Heart: ughhh.. metaphorically. You miss the essence while catching the structure.
Mind: stop it please. I cannot afford to lose.
Heart: afford! One is meant to bear it.
Mind: well for me it is meant to be recovered.
Heart: recovery is not a first hand victory.
Mind: leave it and let the rain swipe it away, that's what rain is to me, what is it to you?
Heart: Countless tears to hide my few.
........to be continued
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- optimism Yayyyy.... beautifully inked Capti ❤️❤️❤️
- john_solomon What a great concept for a piece Fatima. Can't wait for part 2.
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shegram
So captivating, Cappie! I was fixed on this conversation! My voices are
not near as interesting as yours! Looking forward to what's said next!⭐⭐⭐ - aqua_regia_20 amazingly penned ❤
- ambivertquki Deep
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Tried to compress my emotions in six words. Hope you get it ����
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#pod #kriti11 #kriti_13 #amberglow #raven63 #ceesreposts #n_zaara #sixwordstories #rroy27 #ni8ngle #passionbookworm #writerscommunity @writersnetwork @mirakee @readwriteunitethorns are path.
petals, the reward.
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- rashmi_jha ❤️
- _sparkling_soul
- carolyns_challenges You're more than welcome.
- passionbookworm Got that right! ❤️
- _imuahmed Awesome
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#mirakee #writersnetwork #ceesreposts #raven63 #yaminiread #writerstolli #pod #readwriteunite #sixwordstories
Image credits to the rightful sourceBeauty to behold,
Pricky to hold.
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@elusive_me
Iss ko bn'ny mein infinity darkaar hai - elusive_me Achcha ji. Aap sada Y rahein
- shaiz_fs Wow
- john_solomon Great depiction for image Fatima
- sidra_qadir wowwww..@captainfatimahabiba
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@elusive_me
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#mirakee #writersnetwork #ceesreposts #raven63 #yaminiread #writerstolli #pod #readwriteunite
Submitting under #cees_fp_chall
Past is what but a common abode
Where sum of life breeds in accord
Dead and alive, days and nights
Each contrast in a blink, it unites
How many times I sit and wonder
Accompany this a laughter's thunder
Grandma forgets an hour ago lunch
But she remembers the spinach bunch
That she was carrying on her way
Back to home in month of may
Across the road, stopped a van
It dropped there a young man
The stunning interaction made her fall
Youth thereby did not wait for the call
A series of events afterwards, she tells
Till finally were heard the wedding bells
Grandpa though departed year ago
Yet he arrives in nostalgic mode
©captainfatimahabiba
Image credits to the rightful sourceNostalgia
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- shaiz_fs You rock captain
- ishrat_zaman
- carolyns_challenges A magnificently creative, heartfelt, and wonderfully well penned portrayal of the challenge!! ✍
- mann_se_ amazingly penned 👌
- twinkling_girl Woahh amazing
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I held nostalgia,
I held memories,
But, I also held grudges of the lingering sheets;
You held onto chivalry,
You held onto courtesy,
But, you also held numbness, covertly;
I saw effort,
I saw remorse,
But, I also kept being a spoil-sport;
You saw vanity,
You saw futility,
And, you also saw a dearth of reliance and vicinity;
Your love had forgiveness,
Mine had flaws,
That is why we couldn't make up to the ways of laws;
You meant love,
I wanted identity,
Somewhere in between, togetherness left each side, secretly.
My submission for #cees_fp_chall #nostalgia
#poetry #thoughts #unlove
#shaliya #ummerveeri #javeriya #odysseus #yaminiread #tanzread #ntm #sqb #yaish_ #ni8ngle #writersnetwork #writerstolli #mirakee #pod #writers_paradise #poem2heart #p2h #julietscorner #mirakee_assistant #raven63
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- sarbari_thinks @carolyns_challenges thank you so much Ma'am ❤️ I'm glad you liked it.
- bonniesbabu You're most welcome!
- carolyns_challenges You're very welcome.
- sayan_majhi Bori bori
- sarbari_thinks @sayan_majhi thankU thankU❤️