i_fahaits commendable how you've managed to duel clean philosophy and a lavish hint of improperness with razor sharp double entendres. almost like two ironies in bed
absynth@i_faha thanks. Maybe I should name this style emotional erotica or something on those lines. Btw the two ironies in bed part is really a great observation. Now when you say that it makes me feel that this poem could have been written from that perspective too.
thegreymetaphorGod! I kept smirking as I read on and on. What a crisp and quirky piece. Amazingly witty.