Mirakee
When we smiles, when we know nothing
Keep yearning for the lights , with an effort .
Just by hiking, I got to realise
It just to drop yours shame
And to walk away to grow.
Once you found your ways
Be the endless summer there we smiles
And if you want , to find wisdom
Just be part of your journey there by smiles just be it , by wearing your smiles
It just that , it been a different
To become a gentleman
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By having quality of being artistic is different not as same as others because they see world as once we imagine and putting so much effort to remain in the people heart as heart of life is newer a lies
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3w
Happy New Years .
Heart of life , rise from nowhere
Just by the end of days,remember
Those ,the days we been lived.
Let walk along with counting days
By pouring yourself a modes of happiness ?
A smells of teen Where the heart of life .
A chance to be a better men! Bruh -
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The who is happy has luxuries of fame and power
And the one who is finding that luxury,as once you feel spiritual
There no way back .
Either you will awoke or fall between two world fantasy and reality..... -
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4w
Praise yourself sometime
Behold your breath, as if you speak
As if you are telling stories
The life with your blended eyes
Longing for happiness
Shedding tear under this beautiful sky
By thousand of cold wishes
Through this pain, to be better men
Once we used to be!
That is victory
But if your soul feels shame
That is lost . -
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5w
Be a responsible Tibetan !
Moan of rushes , moan by people
Integrity where it stands a worthless
an urge of unity but in lack of sense
Stand with your conscience
If you can’t bear to say truth
Newer be word of unsure
Where the fact of news
And the impact lies under the one word
Like as devil slept underneath Valhalla . -
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5w
Political stand with your conscience !
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5w
Friends along there by
Through this year a rages of pandemic , panic and fearful
By pray god by standing strong
The ‘land of other ‘I say as
To heal through this pain
Lord as to say we are doing good
Relaxing there soul in mid of chaos
I urge to be free by my album -
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7w
You are so important to yourself.
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7w
Sem Gye sang wang
Behold my breath , as I speak
As if I told my story
Her gaze and my blended eyes
Craving her, this beautiful lady
By such, thousand of cold wishes
Remain in my heart
As always yearning for to be loved!
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anvaya
13w
Read More#aestheticwriting #mirakee #pod
Thank you so much for the repost @writersnetwork I'm honoured. ������Aesthetic Writing
I have not written many posts that can be considered as aesthetic writing, but I have seen many writers here do that and have keenly observed and analyzed their posts. I don't know what that way of writing is called exactly, but I guess it's sometimes referred to as "art for the sake of art" or aesthetic writing. The point of aesthetic writing is that it conveys a theme (which can be an imagery or emotion) without explicitly expressing it. It is kinda subtle and when done right can make the reader relate to it. These are some elements, I noticed which are common to most aesthetic works.
1) A very rich vocabulary. To evoke an aesthetic feel, these writers have a wide choice of aesthetic words to choose from. (still haven't figured out from where they get such beautiful words...) The usage of such alluring words makes the readers experience the piece of writing on a deeper level while also giving an aesthetic touch to it.
2) A theme. It can't be something too complicated, but it's something a lot of people can relate to. Common themes, again from my experience are nostalgia, love, heartbreak, death etc.
3) Phrases that don't make literal sense are used. For example, "wilted roses" is enough to signify dying love isn't it, without explicitly stating it? Get the feel? Such phrases are used. The overall point is most often not directly put across. This has a negative drawback as well. For example, if the phrase you use is not very familiar to the majority of readers, they can easily misinterpret the poem. For example if you use " down a lantern lit cobblestone street" to signify nostalgia, your reader could take it as fear or uncertainty or anything she pleases, which again can be a bit of a drawback.
4) No matter how far and widespread the phrases may be , and seem totally unrelated to EACH other they must be related to the overall THEME. At least in a good attempt of this kind of writing.
5) Most often they don't have rhymes or metres. Aesthetic writing originated pretty late, that is during the time when writers were switching from traditional poetry to modern poetry that emphasized on removing restrictions and rules on rhythm and rhymes. So most often you'd find aesthetic poetry written this way.
6) Aesthetic writing need not always be a poem. It is a separate genre on its own. They can also be written in a story-like way, where no story is actually told. Like umm... just aesthetic metaphors used to convey the development of a story rather than plots. Or it can be written as a descriptive piece that's far more abstract than a normal descriptive piece.
Most poets/writers write this way without defining it as aesthetic writing. They do it quite instinctively with an intuitive way of looking at it rather than an analytical way. I have been reading and studying a lot of aesthetic works and the above stated points are merely my observations. This post is just a humble attempt to spread some awareness about this form of writing. I really encourage you to actually read and experience such works and get acquainted with aesthetic writing, if you haven't already.
Happy Reading and Writing!
©anvaya
