Hello everyone! I am a 17 yr old beginner ,trying to write poems It would be really helpful if you give me review on my writingsSo that I can improve well. Thank you!
You are the sunshine! I want to start my day with. You are the twinkling start! I want to stare all night. You are the smile! I want to carry all the time. You are the happiness! I want to hold forever in my life.