1000thmanHi. Well done with your attempt but I beg you if you are going to call this an Acrostic then make it in sentences of say ten syllables of each of the attributes in the letters of your name. If you can organise a rhyme pattern then all the better. I offer this critic out of respectfulness. Kind regards. Philip.
yourbrownbard@1000thman thank you sir.....I'll make the correction in further posts ...will you please read my Villanelle?
1000thmanHi A J. I looked with interest ..... hoping to find your Villanelle. I’ve paged through but couldn’t find it in your posts. Silly me. Copy and paste me a copy soon and I will offer you honest critique. Kind regards.
yourbrownbard@1000thman sir it's titled as I don't really lie.....it's peachy in background and I've mentioned you again